[quote=@Phoenix]
[@c3p-0h] I found it neither "uninteresting" nor "short." But I won't criticize your personal standards. xP
However, I'm not sure if there's discontinuity here. [@Prints Avoid] seemed to describe that Joy was already there when Haven would have entered and that Haven would have seen Diego and his Scyther as well as the stranger.
I'd like to clarify something else, as well: Did you intend to have "found" Sapphire (Diego was wondering where she was as she hadn't returned)?
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yup, haven found sapphire. or rather, sapphire found [i]her[/i]. but i totally misread the end of the post. i thought joy had already led the stranger away, so it was just diego in the room. i… have no excuse for missing the scyther. hectic week lol. for continuity purposes, follow prints' post for who's there and who's not. haven's dialogue doesn't change.