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Better. Though do note that mind effecting abilities have always been a highly contested power in RP's like mind reading and invisibility. Thus, while I don't mind your power working on NPC's and the like, be aware that they might not work as intended for PC's. How it affects them I'll leave to the individual player. Maybe the power works on them as advertised, maybe it doesn't. I encourage that you communicate with others to make sure that his Divine Protection is used smoothly in the RP. Otherwise he looks good to me.

Any other CS that needs a review?