[quote=@Lucius Cypher]
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Better. Though do note that mind effecting abilities have always been a highly contested power in RP's like mind reading and invisibility. Thus, while I don't mind your power working on NPC's and the like, be aware that they might not work as intended for PC's. How it affects them I'll leave to the individual player. Maybe the power works on them as advertised, maybe it doesn't. I encourage that you communicate with others to make sure that his Divine Protection is used smoothly in the RP. Otherwise he looks good to me.

Any other CS that needs a review? 
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Thanks! Regardless it sounds cooler than it is, but this will more likely than not be used mostly on NPC's. If anyone would like to play along with the gimmick it's cool, if not it's cool as well. And thanks again! If anything I'll PM anyone who'm I'm RPing with at the moment as to create a feasible outcome without metagaming or seeming like I can puppeteer their characters lol XD