[@BCTheEntity][@Kafka Komedy]
Both are good so far for being works in progress, so I'm ok with them right now. Please notify me when they are finished though so I can finish the evaluation.

[@Turbowraith]
It's accepted, but please note his motivations for why he's with the party on this mission in the first place. He also seems like a character you would make, so there's that compliment.