[@McHaggis]
[quote]1. If you can find a better quality image for the top of the sheet (for aesthetic reasons) that would be grand. You and I both know it's the janitor from Scrubs/Neil Flynn, and the dude himself is fine, we just need higher quality image![/quote]

turns out the preview option make images look way bigger than they actually will be. will probably use these.
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[quote]2. We're not sure about the power as it seems overly complex and difficult to explain as simply as possible, and we're especially not fond of the 'growing' metal bit. We suggest Metal Manipulation as an alternative because it's more dynamic and flexible as a power :>[/quote]

out of curiosity would you accept it if I removed the growth part and kept it to generating one type of metal. If not that's cool, I'll do metalbending instead, just means i have to carry spools of steel cable around or something. 

[quote]3. Finally, we'd like you to expand on the backstory a bit (as well as maybe add a paragraph break in there). You go through his early life very quickly:[/quote]
will do, did you decide where this is set country wise as that may affect the military bit.