It was more the long speech she gave that would be interjected before it could really begin - the rest is perfectly fine. Well, granted, I should have reconstructed Koraakan's whole last addressing to her rather than just summarized it... Here I am asking Jack to elaborate on the summary because it omits some of the important details (such as the Yths apparently rather impressive jumping-skills; wouldn't have expected that from something structured like that, so I pretty much imagined it getting the pikemen's shins or something) and not bothering to rewrite a few sentences of my post just so you had something substantial to base your post on. Oeh. (Thaler sure goes back and forth between standpoints... Indecisiveness/confusion? Guess I can't really blame her...) --- Edit: Ouch. *hugs*