[@BKburke]
I like the character, but I would like to address a few things about him that I personally don't have beef with, but I feel like it'd help in the long run.

He's a tall guy, firstly. Not that there's anything wrong with that, but this was a tall-dwarf sized crypt. He'd be hitting ceiling a lot, which would be annoying I'd imagine. I'd lower him like a half-foot in height, but that's up to you.

He has incredible psychic powers, which just seem a bit broken to me. If you nerfed a few of them down (like the mental barriers being equal to wooden shields) that would be appreciated, but I do want the detect-magic eye removed. I have a few GM tricks I want to pull off and this guy would hurt that.

tl;dr - Nerf his powers, remove detect-magic eye, and - if you want to - make him slightly shorter.