[@Asura] Sakura's only point of shining was versus Sasori, and she was being controlled by an old hag. :lol Though she was definitely above all other side characters (Kiba, etcetera) mostly because, well, she was in a team with Naruto and Sasuke, so naturally she'd be somewhat similar in calibre. Though if she was to truly represent the female side character Naruto/Sasuke deserved, she'd be more strong I imagine. Now she just seemed like an emotional damsel in distress. Just my opinion, of course. [@Bishop] If you wish to exclude these.. rather basic information pieces.. then you had better come up with a reason why Konoha would even consider letting in someone that is A) foreign B) undocumented and C) possibly a spy, and/or dangerous. The metal wires kunai blabla falls under standard shinobi tools. It says you can have as many of them as you want within reason, not that you can perform them unlimited times. It also states that you should add them within reason, as in 'not every technique'. Character is decent, but the fear doesn't make sense. What family can he lose. You make a large point out of the fact that everyone in his clan is dead (Sasuke much) but then you say his family dying would be a fear. There's no family. There is no kekkei genkai name. It needs more explanation because I can't understand what it does. You mark someone for lightning and then any lightning attacks on them are more powerful? Doesn't sound like a kekkei genkai, sounds more like a hiden, or even a regular jutsu.