[@Korkoa]I think it's great! I immidiately spotted an oversight on my part: a [b]Role on the ship:[/b] tab, even though this becomes clear in the history tab I added earlier for clarity. 

in the 'role on the ship' line of thought; how do you see that ship pick up cargo in space? Would he be more of a 'spotter' for valuable stuff or would he use another ship for scavenging purposes?

Aside from that, though I think we can stretch it, the hangar bay of the Swift Fortune would not be big enough for a light freighter, which means that normally it would be connecter via a docking clamp or anything. Just so you know ^^

I see nothing wrong with the CS apart from the entire first part being in caps, if you add my late addition to the CS you are good to poost on in the characters tab!