@Feisty-Pants...I see that you made her Gon and changed her current story. Besides those changes, you didn't change the other things I asked you to change. You should also use a spell check program and read over your work. As I said, for Advanced RP I am stricter than Casual. Because I believe that Casual and Advanced should not be blurred. I take reading comprehension and basic grammar and spelling into heavy consideration in Advanced because those basic skills are forsaken as the younger generations have shorter attention spans (and due to ESL writers lol). Read over the last two posts I wrote in response to your CS to see the corrections I asked you to make.

I really hope @Lexicon comes back. It would also be great if @Loki Odinson would make a post where his character enters the tavern as well :)