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They go to head to the Intsitute and Carlosle realises he can't just teleport,

"....Can...Can I ride you?"
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They go to head to the Intsitute and Carlosle realises he can't just teleport,

"....Can...Can I ride you?"


I mean, she would actually agree, so long as Carlosle didn't ask in a demeaning way. She's proud of her centaurian body, and would view it as a confirmation of her strength: look, the two-legs rely on her. She wouldn't act arrogant or mean about it, but she would be more flattered than insulted.
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So no: wink wink nudge nudge RIDE geddit?
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You know when Gellert gets his hands on Lark--as I can't imagine him getting away from Gellert at all lol--I wonder what's in store for him. Maybe Lark will be banished from Wellborough :P
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sorry for my short and detail-lacking posts. i've been uninspired but i wont let it keep me from continuing the story forward. also @Arkaotic our character's voice colors are very similar so i chose a darker shade of blue to differentiate their voices in my post
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Sorry dude, didn't even notice that myself till now. Also ooo sheet, things getting tense over here with the fleshspinner
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My post is nearly done. So if anyone else is currently writing, I hope you won't mind holding off just a bit. Two people have posted while I was writing, and both times I've had to nearly re-write the whole fucking thing.

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Sorry dude, didn't even notice that myself till now. Also ooo sheet, things getting tense over here with the fleshspinner


I'll be telling my children about this one day.

"And that's the story, kids, of how I lost a character on the second page because he was kinda gross and funny looking."

sorry for my short and detail-lacking posts.


Your posts were certainly detailed enough for me. I don't think they lacked anything necessary. That's what matters.

Of all people, I know how fun it is to add tons of detail, but don't feel obligated to put more facts in a post than are needed. When you write, the goal should be to tell someone what happened, how it happened, and who was involved in it's happening. If a detail is not relevant, don't include it, and don't feel the need to apologize for not having it. :D
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After the death sentence from the archmage I'd prefer an escape act, talk down or minor skirmish to a full blown fight. Whatcha think?
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The poor Fleshspinner is going to end up with the least amount of screentime at this rate, haha.

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The poor Fleshspinner is going to end up with the least amount of screentime at this rate, haha.


Noo, I like him D:
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Sorry dude, didn't even notice that myself till now. Also ooo sheet, things getting tense over here with the fleshspinner


kaezira fucking hates those things. in his eyes, magic is a beautiful work of art. and he sees their form of magic is a mockery of this art form.

Two people have posted while I was writing, and both times I've had to nearly re-write the whole fucking thing.


deepest apologies.

Your posts were certainly detailed enough for me. I don't think they lacked anything necessary. That's what matters.

Of all people, I know how fun it is to add tons of detail, but don't feel obligated to put more facts in a post than are needed. When you write, the goal should be to tell someone what happened, how it happened, and who was involved in it's happening. If a detail is not relevant, don't include it, and don't feel the need to apologize for not having it. :D


yea i guess that makes sense. but i find that adding the detail makes the reading experience more enjoyable and a lot more novel-like.

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@Jeyma

After the death sentence from the archmage I'd prefer an escape act, talk down or minor skirmish to a full blown fight. Whatcha think?


It sorta depends on how SOMEONE responds to my next post. (Small hint: It's you. That someone is you.)

If your character is unsympathetic, expect a pretty awesome skirmish. As my CS said, Shertul has an insane level of strength and speed. Fleshspinners can jump many feet in the air, tear limbs apart, move as fast as a horse, etc. He'll probably try tear a chunk out of yo' face, kick some dirt into the mage's eyes, and then run away faster than a centaur.

And he'll need to, since my own character of Windleaf is allying herself with the Nephilim.

The poor Fleshspinner is going to end up with the least amount of screentime at this rate, haha.

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I always have my beefy centaur chick!
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kaezira fucking hates those things. in his eyes, magic is a beautiful work of art. and he sees their form of magic is a mockery of this art form.


Well luckily if he doesn't do anything outrageously stupid he's not directly broken any accords, not to mention he and Carlisle are pretty beaten up so I doubt it'll end in a death.

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Have to wait and see my friend, am actually pretty excited haha
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I'll be telling my children about this one day.

"And that's the story, kids, of how I lost a character on the second page because he was kinda gross and funny looking."


You should add a lesson about discrimination in there.

You can hide behind the girls; they'll protect you. xD

Just don't kidnap me if you run.
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<Snipped quote by Jeyma>

You should add a lesson about discrimination in there.

You can hide behind the girls; they'll protect you. xD

Just don't kidnap me if you run.
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@Soragoku Darn, I was hoping it'd be the Game Grumps version.
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@Soragoku Darn, I was hoping it'd be the Game Grumps version.


They're so funny. I laugh every time I watch Game Grumps.
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