[@Kronshi]

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First off, you seem to imply that your gem has five eyes. Gems have max, two eyes. 
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I can clarify her only having 2 eyes underneath the visor in the cs.

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Additionally, newborns don't just pop out of the ground with all sorts of equipment installed on them nor would Home-World attach electrical cables to a Gem's gem. Even if that happens to be her weapon, I've said no complex weaponry and a nine-tailed whip made of cables is my definition of complex. 
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The backstory explains why she has that stuff, she makes it herself after emerging. I can change the weapon to something simpler (perhaps a gladius) and make the cabling something she made or I can make her passive be prehensile hair and her active the Tech-empathy via it.

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I don't mean to be rude but I almost feel this was made as a joke especially with the nickname 1337haxor27. 
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It's a username not nickname. It would be very silly to actually want to go by that in person. I'll remove it anyway for clarity.

Would these changes be satisfactory?