Well I'll just post it here so I can get multiple opinions.

First, I edited my CS so you guys wouldn't get confused. What did I edit?

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[*]Reworded tankiness[/*]
[*]Reworded Chakra Control deficiency[/*]
[*]Took out the third effect of his bloodline ability because it was "getting on [Lesli's] nerves"[/*]
[*]Took out like two abilities and traits[/*]
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Anyway, let me clear this shit up. First, when I said poor chakra control I failed to be clear. I meant the whole system that Kakashi explained when training Naruto, where there was two steps to adding elements to jutsu (It was something along the lines of chakra nature formation and chakra something else formation). He explained to Naruto that you must complete both steps to in order to make a wind rasengan. What I meant to say was not that KIsheto couldn't control chakra, but he had a really poor grasp of the chakra nature molding step, as it was seen in the first Generation RP, where he tried to make a new jutsu with Hiron (I think, Gero's HOn character or w/e) but couldn't because he was bad at adding elements to shape. Shadow Clones don't require elements, and therefore only take the other side of the chakra nature whatever, and thus he can pull that off.

Furthermore, I redefined how he has higher than normal chakra. It is primarily due to his bloodline - their ability IS having a lot of chakra. It's not like I'm superloaded on chakra + I have the sharingan + I have a sword that I can sue with magical abilities. It's his KG. Thats it (for now).

OH and I don't know if you missed this... but I stated that he doesn't have his bloodline ability unlocked yet... He may unlock it by second post, maybe by chunin, maybe NEVER. When I first made Kisheto, I was expecting to wait for a good moment and then ask Gero (who was my sensei) if I could unlock it and gain the benefits at that point. I'm not starting off with it... >.>

But to explain it, the spirit isn't literally a soul from another realm. That's just the name they have for it. Yashime genes allow for them to harness this third tier energy within their chakra and they call it spirit. It's just a really mysterious energy! Like Element Zero from mass effect! The fact that it "has a life of its own" is just due to natural side effects of using it - the user can go crazy and destroy him/herself. But essentially, Spirit's properties allow for really cool ninjutsu and for amplifying ninjutsu (via increasing the chakra to the point in which its floating around the user's body). You see? That IS his bloodline ability. His bloodline ability isn't "Oh yeah.. I get a lot of chakra, oh and I can do super cool ninjutsu, and I get cool eyes and I get armor". It's "I get chakra, and because of my genes, this excess chakra allows for cool jutsu."

And you wish for me to explain why they can access this mysterious element? Well... why do Uchiha have the ability to activate the Sharingan and not the UZumaki? Why can the Nara control their shadow but not the Akimichi? Like, for real? 

I hope you understand that this isn't a demon situation. No outside sentient being is entering his body to give him power. Maybe I should change the name of the energy source from "spirit" to something else that's easier to understand :/

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Oh and hold up a second.

[quote] I must request you will either change the Kekkei Genkai so that the control over it (The amount of chakra the user recieves from outside forces) will be decreased and then enable him to recieve more as time passes and he trains it, or that you will lower the regular amounts of chakra he has.[/quote]

You think the ability's listed in this CS are gonna be executed in full burst in his first fight? You think he's gonna walk up to his first fight and use Void Field at full power, activate Yashingan, summon 200 clones that all use Fireball jutsu? My first CS was twice as "OP" as this, but the maximum my character did (while it lasted) was make 20 clones, charging his sensei, poofing all his clones, and passing out. I know how to control my character, but if you want me to make a cs based on EXACTLY what he has full control on the second I start rp'ing, then all I have is a history and his name. I want to RP him learning these skills and training - as I did in my first Kisheto. I wrote that he had fireball jutsu, but he couldn't even use it until he trained with Hiron in IC.

And honestly, Shadow Clone Jutsu is just my favorite thing due to its versatility. Why can he use that but not other jutsu? Because he's spent all his time using it that he hasn't spent any time doing anything else - the reason is a time factor, not an ability factor (when it comes to why Shadow Clone jutsu is his main). Even IFI have poor control of chakra, if I practice one jutsu for 10 years versus someone who practices 100 jutsu for 10 years.... like c'mon now.

And Void Field? If blocking a Kunai is OP, then... jeeze xD 
In all honesty, if a kunai was thrown at Kisheto, I would probably just take it. Just a little knife, yo. And like I said, I didn't mean his ability to just control chakra - I meant his ability to mold a specific element. And not only that, but its only "invisible" to people who can't see or sense chakra. It's strength doesn't come from invisibility - it's from the no-hands ability. And yes, that's exactly what it's to be... a jutsu to be a defense mechanism. But its not like if a jutsu hits his shield, he just brushes it off. That chakra that blocks it dissappears is GONE. In other words, constant vulnerability to direct chakra damage.