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I'm nearly done with my CS. I'm doing some final edits and some formatting. It seems I broke the BB code somewhere. Time to hunt haha!

I should have my character up tonight. I made her as a primary healer/debuffer. I tried to make her as none OP as possible. But I wasn't sure where to draw the line. Hopefully the GMs will critique to their taste, and I'll edit to his or her critiques as needed.
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@Raijinslayer - Hey man, how you been? Character submissions will be closing tomorrow, but specially extended for those with certain conditions. If you can gather up a character by.. Thursday, then I don't see why not.
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@RocketteI've got a job now, so that's been something. But ye, things have been nice. Soon as I saw that this was a thing, I knew I couldn't resist jumping back in(and right in the nick of time too. Thanks for the extension as I thought I'd have to rush something out tonight). Just a quick question about the new system, does the increase by 100% in a stat mean that it's being doubled? I'm a bit confused looking over all of these, so I thought I'd ask for clarification.

Also, I'm going for Archer because we don't seem to have one yet, with Red and Green being the elements this time around.
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@Raijinslayer - Don't worry about the core sets; the calculations are devised under rolls and basic mathematics to give the final product. They're more for us GMs, as a core selection shouldn't make or break a character. If you catch my drift.
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Here's my character sheet. I'm still playing around with the formatting and editing grammar and such. GMs, please feel free to tear apart my character sheet. You want something changed or think the character needs reworking, let me know.



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@Damiann47 Just finished reading about your character. I got a feeling Bruce and Arin are gonna be friends.
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@The Survivor Actually when I read Bruce's sheet I thought the same thing. Both were regular squishy human soldiers, both aren't entirely calm people, and both are close and personal.
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@Damiann47 I mean, Bruce was a cop but close enough :p
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@The Survivor Heh, my bad. Sorry about that, guess characters sorta blend together for me until I get to see them in action, you know? Guess I could've gone and reread the sheet though.
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@Damiann47 Also having Big Boss, who was indeed a soldier, as a pic probably didn't help lol.
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@The Survivor Oh woops, might have been thinking about the wrong character. Yeah I can still see them getting along though.
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@RocketteHey, how long was/has the war been a thing? Have a backstory idea, but I'm not quite sure if it's viable or not yet.
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@Raijinslayer - Refer to this timeline. Also, keep within mind the new information provided regarding SOLDIERS. This is a bit different from the first installment of Requiem. If you're having issues with a backstory that coincides with the lore provided and timeline, PM me and we can talk.

3056 I. — Aeon meteors impact Viera; landing throughout the various continents.
3061 A.I. — Scientists of the Dalmastice government capture all the Aeons within a span of five years.

3063 A.I. — First experiments on the Aeons begin two years following their extraction.

3078 A.I. — Fifteen years of research yield the finding of Aeon cells that slow aging, repair cells and grant vitality and strength.

3079 A.I. — The following year they begin the pharmaceutical campaigns to benefit all mankind.

3081 A.I. — Suddenly, the Aeons are "sealed" away and the cells no longer offered within medicines. Fort Lullin is built.
3086 A.I. — Five years of debates and disputes leads to the first rebellion and initial divide of the government.
3089 A.I. — The first battles begin, and the slums of Archadia are attacked, revealing the monsters and terrible creatures in the first massacre in prelude to the wars. This is the present time of events.
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@Ambiguity - Once my Co-Gm is available, we'll get to your character. We deliberate over characters usually in the day when we have time. So once we read over her, we'll let you know what's up! Just letting you know, so you don't think we've over-looked you or anything.
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Thanks for the heads up and please take your time! No rush or anything on my end. I'm just anxiously awaiting to hear what may or may not needs to be changed haha!
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So Tuesday -- today -- is the deadline, yes? Considering putting a character together when I get home from work; would've done it earlier, but was making sure some other RPs I was involved with were well and truly dead before I got too much on my plate.
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Master of Shadows ||| Weaponize
33 | 12th of May | 5' 7" | Second Rank.


Natalya Kortensky


A P P E A R A N C E.
Though diminutive for her build, Natalya is a strong, muscle-bound woman. Her bulk more than makes up for what she doesn't have in inches. She has bright blue eyes, with a head of short, closely cropped blonde hair. With strong, worn hands, and a physique to rival her male peers, she stands out amongst the other finer ladies of Archadia.

Her choice of clothes is representative of her upbringing as a military girl; fatigues in either urban gray digital camo or snow-flecked camo, along with her choice of combat boots and gloves. On her head sits a beret with the crest of the Galbadian Armed Forces, and the beret is usually either a dark red or a deep navy blue. If in her civilian dress, she prefers to wear a digital camo tank top with the insignia of the Galbadian Medical Corps on the left breast, along with cargo pants, boots, and her choice of a military coat or civilian bomber jacket. She's also never seen without a military cap, either in jungle or urban camo.


P S Y C H E.
"V oblasti zdravookhraneniya, prikhodit sila.
V sile, prikhodit otvagu.
V khrabrosti, prikhodit chest'.
V chest', prikhodit velichiye."


Natalya is loyal, honest and headstrong. Without a head for leadership, she instead leads by example. To her patients, she is like their mother; caring, kind, yet firm and disciplined. To her friends, she is like a sister; loud, loyal and understanding. To a stranger, she seems like an enigma; noisy and humorous, yet harsh in her duties and discipline.

Natalya is also rather expressive for such a stern soldier, and is never seen with her stern expression when off duty. Instead she boasts a loud, raucous laugh and a bright, welcoming grin. Rough back pats, shoulder punches and vigorously shaking her friends when excited is part and parcel of her character.


B A C K G R O U N D.
Born in Dalmasca and raised in Nibelheim, Natalya was a military child through and through. She was brought up in an army family and joined the Galbadian Armed Forces once she was of age. She was placed in the Galbadian Medical Corps and subsequently put through both rigorous military training in combat medicine, and a scholarly degree in surgical medicine and pharmacology while out of the army. Once she had both, she was given the post of lead doctor in a small, military-run clinic in Nibelheim. She saw to many of the sick and ill there, often running the clinic late into the night for those that sought aid when their loved ones fell ill.

She took care of her patients with all the caring a mother would in taking care of her children; with love, kindness and patience. And this kindness is what brought her to the attention of the SOLDIER project. Even with a combat medic, the project still needed a proper doctor in the field where there were little clinics or hospitals.

Unique in her purpose amongst the SOLDIERs, Natalya is a proper doctor, both with her powers and with her hands and gear. Someone who isn't afraid to get their hands dirty in the blood of their enemies or their friends. Willing to fight down the strongest of foes to save the lives of her friends, Natalya is a staunch ally and a welcome comrade to have in the field.


R E G A L I A.
Natayla doesn't kid around when she talks about her gear. Her signature Sil'naya Ruka Zakona is a chunky, tanky suit of battle armour that houses her various weapons. With the insignia of the Medical Corps painted onto both shoulder pauldrons, the suit of armour is a reminder for Natalya to never forget her origins. It monitors her vitals and those of her team, augments her strength and agility, and increases her durability against damage, making her a tank that protects her party easily.

The suit itself houses two weapons that augment her chosen Aeon. These weapons are not modular, but are built in a way that they fit into her armour's housing slots like gloves. Their forms move and shift like machines, even though the weapons themselves remain usable and functional. A combat shotgun rests on her back, just above her right shoulder. A machine pistol lies folded within a holster on her right thigh. Within her left bracer is a deployable riot shield that encompasses most of her body when she crouches, along with a mount for her weapons. Her gauntlets themselves are heavily armoured and resistant to the force she can punch at.

M E T E O R P U N C H [strength. chaos. destruction.] Channeling Alexander's rage into her fists, she can deliver a sub-sonic punch that is able to devastate heavy armour or solid structures.


O V E R G R O W T H [caring. kindness. selflessness.] Natalya digs deep into Alexander's guided fury and finds his soft spots for kindness, and releases spores from her armour that, when touched, are absorbed rapidly into the body and provide healing for wounds and injuries.


F O R C E S H I E L D [determination. endurance. adaptability.] Empowering her shield, she is able to raise a much bigger force shield that can absorb incoming damage in a much wider area, covering roughly two people standing shoulder to shoulder from head to toe.


A E O N.
A L E X A N D E R | Red & Green
Alexander was found in Gatrea, at the land bridge between the continent and Galbadia. Within the ruins of an old castle, the remains of the once grand stone dragon were found. Its DNA provided Natalya with the powers she has now.


C O R E.
MEDIC: healing by 100%


O V E R D R I V E.
U L T I M A W E A P O N
Fusing all of her guns together and empowering them with her Aeon, she is able to fire an extreme burst of raw magical power in the form of a giant laser that scorches a massive area. After which, plants rapidly grow within the burnt area that release spores and pollen that heal allies within the field.
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For relations, I have it in my sheet that London came from a wealthy family of those who tried to get her into SOLDIER. She was picked for her skills and aptitude, though her parents did try to buy their way in. So rumors would be abound that she got in from mommy and daddy's money. Add to that that she isn't very talkative for the most part and that could add more rumors (ice queen, frigid b_tch, etc.) I'll leave that up to you :)
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This seems really interesting and I will be keeping my eye on it. Seems like you've got plenty of characters for the time being but if a few drop I might throw my hat in. I have an idea for a character at the tip of my tongue fingers.
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@Clumsywordsmith - We're reaching full capacity at this point, tallying out to twelve characters in total with those I'm aware of. Today is the deadline, but I'm hard pressed to allow any more submissions at this rate in case of having too many. I'll ask my co-GM and let him make the final decision.

@Kriminel - Yes, we've pretty much reached the cap right now. But, I'm glad to have your interest, should space open up, we'll be glad to have you.

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