[quote=@Mega Birb] [@KoL] Green Guild gets screwed, got it. Also here, one down. [hider=Lodestar Abilities n' Stuff] Lodestar Abilities: Tipper – Passive – The tip of any bladed weapon Lodestar wields deals 20% increased damage, however the rest of the weapon deals -10% less damage. Attacks with the tip ignore 5% of an enemy’s armor. Astra – Active – A rapid 5-hit attack in the shape of a star. Each strike deals 35% damage. Each successive hit after a strike that deals damage cannot be blocked until Astra finishes. 3-round cooldown. Blade Squall – Active – Two clones of Lodestar’s sword are formed that lag behind the original by 0.5 second and 1 second, striking once for each blade. The cloned swords deal 75% damage and last for one round. 2-round cooldown. Grand Counter – Active – Lodestar blocks an incoming attack, only to direct it back at the attacker. The damage the original attack would have done is amplified by 50%. Mistiming Grand Counter leaves Lodestar vulnerable, increasing damage taken by 15% for 0.5 seconds after the attempt. Can be used at will. Seeing Stars – Active – A powerful shield or pommel bash that stuns a target for an action and deals 75% weapon damage. Stunned targets take 10% increased damage under the effect of Seeing Stars. 4-round cooldown. [b][i]Feats:[/i][/b] Lv3 - Furious Blows - Increase attack speed by 10%. Lv4 - Readied Mind - Increases your ability to react to your enemy. Lv5 - Icarus Attack - An attack from above, using gravity as a means to enhance the damage even further. The user also takes no falling damage when using this skill. The higher the fall the more damage done. Lv6 – Boomerang - You can throw your weapon at your target and it will return to your hand shortly after. The attack will do as much damage as a regular strike would have. Lv7 - Unburden - Your equipment, regardless of what it is, no longer encumbers you or your agility. [i][b]Equipment:[/b][/i] [color=fff200]Legendary Set[/color] – [i]Grand Valkyrie Warden[/i] – A set of expectantly rare and high-level revealing armor, the Grand Valkyrie Warden set bonus provides a 15% bonus to health, movement speed, and attack speed. A lesser 5% bonus is granted to attack damage and damage resistance. [color=fff200][i]'Let the bombs fall, they can't stop you now.'[/i][/color] [color=ed1c24]Mythical Weapon[/color] – [i]Rosethorn[/i] – A saber modeled after a lethal rose, a rare drop from the boss of a certain plant-themed dungeon. It has a 10% chance to poison enemies on contact and, as most rare weapons do, has a higher base damage output than most weapons. [color=ed1c24][i]'Slay it with flowers.'[/i][/color] [/hider] EDIT: I decided that the other NPC not related to Jiro wasn't really needed. Can just be a random mage that's cool like the rest of the Harleys. Also is the plural of Harley spelled Harlies or Harleys? General question. [/quote] Technically, Eris is just playing the pragmatic officer, she wouldn't do that unless it was a worst case scenario. Also, this secondary character seems really powerful. Especially that counter attack ability and those equipments. I'll wait to see what [@TheWindel] and [@Lucius Cypher] will say about it before giving a final opinion, but I guess some adjustments may be necessary.