Doing these up on my phone. Gonna get up the last few bits of feedback and start picking players tomorrow/tonight

[@TemplarKnight07][hider=the things]a very typically religious chaplain, not that that's bad by any means. The character itself is well written, and I'm not seeing any major discrepancies. A bit on the arrogant side, but it fits and I like it. This isn't a criticism, but Oscar's ability boost blessing probably wouldn't work on any non-religious characters. [/hider] 

[@Atrophy][hider=the things]very righteous and strong character, the hard headedness toes a very fine line between party disagreements/character development and outright conflict between characters. Your character mentions being naturally gifted with magic- would that be arcane magic? As divine magic is a gift by the gods to their priests. I know it's in her character, but she's also quite martially powerful, which is a bit at odds with the sort of tough, increasingly desperate feel I want to give the rp, but nothing that can't be worked with. [/hider]