[quote=@Sypherkhode822] Made a person! She's probably the most out-there character I've tried in a while, but it should be fun. (I also imported Jocasta Nuts from the other Rp I'm playing. They're a trans-dimensional schedule II narcotic.) [/quote] Some of my critiques: - God mode online! So she's a mage, uses a bow, a dagger, has magic armour which also makes her strong, fast, able to see in the dark, oh, and she's a mage. Damn, my knight is starting to feel like a powerless little nobody. - A bit too similar to my character. Wakes up with no memory but has a powerful gift, in your case, magic and an alternative personality, though in your case it exists in parallel with the original personality and not on top of it or below; - So how much magic does she know? I take it that at 19, not much, right? Anyway, it wasn't very clear. Hope my critiques helped.