[@Hammerman] The only issue I see is with the last part of her Biography where she encounters Amen. The RP actually begins with Amen returning to Thebes to assume his new role as Pharaoh. So you would need to change it so that they have their meeting before in a different city/town/whatever. As to how they'll meet in Thebes and she becoming a Vizier, we can save that discussion if Layla is accepted. Everything else looks good.