[@Eviledd1984] This CS suffers from a lot of the same problems as the CS we're working on for the DC game. Quite a few typos, punctuation and capitalization errors, etc. 

As far as the character presented, I like the concept for a villain or possibly an anti-hero or wildcard. I noticed you didn't know what to put for Key Differences since he's not a direct analog of another character, but I think I remember reading something somewhere about a possible connection to Nightmare that would be cool. Some of the actual bits of Bio, Sample Arcs, and your Supporting Characters list may need some edits though. Also, I think in the original CS requirements for this it was asked for Experience to be "anywhere from a few days up to 2 years." I made exceptions to the rule for the alternate universe Hulkerine as well as Deadgene since he was a mercenary for some time before putting on a costume, but you'll have to convince me why your guy needs an extra year of experience. 

The parts of the CS I wanted to discuss involved the villains and supporting characters. If you plan on being a member of some more recent Brotherhood, [@BlackSam3091] and myself will have to work with you on an actual roster in case we need them to show up later on for somebody else. With the Sample Arcs you mentioned being a gun for hire and working with Kingpin, who we've all already discussed could still be operating business as usual well into his 70's or 80's [can't remember who's character he was also gonna play a role in], but Tombstone and Hammerhead still running around robbing banks at that age is a little much. With your Supporting Characters list Tombstone is on there twice despite Kingpin not being listed once [and Kingpin would be a much more important character to list]. Tombstone and Hammerhead could be replaced by a couple no-name goons in the context of the story since they'd likely be too old to rob banks. I'm guessing Omega Red and Wanda/Scarlet Witch are listed to represent the Brotherhood, but I'd just want to put out there Omega Red's never worked for the Brotherhood before. Wanda would make an interesting choice to lead the group in her old age though, a lot of potential with that idea. Gwenpool though... gonna have to veto that one. Aside from not wanting too many alternate universe characters running around, she'd still be in her 40's and I just don't want an old lady in a pink Deadpool suit running around doing the usual Deadpool style shenanigans. Fighting an older Spiderman [Miles] at some point in your career was fine, and I'll likely still use him [Miles] to a degree later on for something with a next gen New Warriors. 

So in closing, the CS needs a bit of work but there's potential. Working in a connection to Nightmare, elaborating more on what you've got planned for your character's backstory and story arcs, and fixing the punctuation and grammar issues would make this CS a lot more acceptable. 

~KL~