[@Shadow Daedalus] It looks good to me! I think the only thing maybe to add their age when they first met then, just so there's a good idea and a semi time line of when everyone met/how long they've known each other for. So far, Jitka and Adam are childhood friends, and by the sounds of it [@Fisticuffs]' character is going to be a sort of mentor to Adam. Also, it might be good to add how everyone gets along with each other, unless it would be better to develop everyone's ties through the rp. [@Jinxlynx] ALSO! I have the [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/161265-war-of-unitatis/ooc]OOC[/url] officially up! So we can all set up shop there, and once we get the final CS and maybe smooth over some details, we can officially get started! ^_^