I thought adding several players to my roleplay would make me go all out and make a book in each post. Exaggerated but I felt I could write more. And no details are not what makes a story good. Its the way the details are presented. Turns out a lot of posts have little interaction with players and are instead internal struggles between the players own characters and how they percieve the world. Whether this stems from the writers own personal struggles or my inability to interact the shit out of their character with npcs and environment. Whatever the case its mildly annoying.