I wonder, are WIPs of character sheets okay to post?

I'm doing quite well with the backstory but I think the spells might need some pondering over. I hope you don't mind me making up some locations within the city - if this is a sandbox I think we might need more geographical information to toy with and I wouldn't mind helping out with that instead of making new factions.

I'm also considering making a slave character too, if anyone would be inclined to take her in.