[quote=@Lucius Cypher]
[@Lugubrious]

Not bad. I'd like a little bit more information on Strigiforme if you could though. While I have a crux of their nature from your backstory more details about their natural abilities and such would be nice.

I would like to ask that you make yourself somewhat less established, if that makes any sense. Ideally I'd like everyone to sort of start off on the same economical level from the start, meaning that you don't really have any support during your initial career as an adventurer. Heck, no one should be an adventurer just yet. Those who have written that they are in their backstory I have a few ideas to explain why this isn't so, though yours is a bit too, how to say, legitimate.

Beyond that he's fine as a character. More details about his race and maybe dial back his rapport with the Nightcrawlers. I suggest that Quarel has just recently started his intention to be an adventurer, moving into a distant countryside bunkhouse (that's where everyone is starting out at), without any of his bosses knowing or at least informing Quarel about his decision. It could be something interesting for Quarel to explore however. 
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Alright, I think I've done what I need to.  There's information about strigiforme abilities in both the race and skill sections.  If there's anything else, I'll try and sort it out.