Alright so, a few things. One, I really wish Mahz would add a quick bar in for bolding, italicizing and all that jazz. I miss it. Second. [b]Wraith[/b] Not accepted until you complete that ish and add some weaknesses and bring him down a smidge. [b]Rare[/b] I'd still like some emphasis on the abilities GA does have. Make him seem like a badass, like he is! So, for Archery, you could have something like "Archery - Honing his skills from a young age, Oliver can strike most targets with ease. An eye that is adept at tracking movements, Queen is able to hit specks from distances that normal humans can only dream of. Moving targets don't bother him, though other obstacles such as smoke can hinder him." [b]Venom[/b] We're working on yours lol [b]Tyler[/b] I'm sorry this is late, but I hate to see you go. If you ever want to step back in, I'll be sure to give you the opportunity :) [b]Yog[/b] Could you give me more in his powers and abilities section? What else can he do with his powers. I know in the reboot, they've made him much more formidable and versatile, can you elaborate on that. Also the general finish up your CS stuff. [b]Hillan[/b] The premise is good, but put the weaknesses in the CS and add specific limits to his powers, don't gloss over them. How long can he fight, for example. Also, if you have any questions, feel free to PM me or ask here. Woot woot!