[quote=Yog Sothoth]
I added to my faction sheet so you should have something to read, but I am still working on it
[/quote]

I have read through your sheet, and once I have done a bit of fact-checking, I'll let you know my thoughts of the WiP so far. On another note, regarding Cosmic's comment on the Stratocracy/Republic, I don't think the two mesh very well, but think that perhaps you could try something more akin to either a [url=http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shogun]Shogunate[/url], a standard Stratocracy, or a [url=http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Meritocracy]Meritocracy[/url]. Out of those, considering the history of your nation, a Meritocracy strikes me as the most fitting of the nation, but these are only suggestions to help, not actual criticisms that need changed.