[quote=@Liotrent]
[@Dynamo Frokane]

I actually have to edit everything so the heads up is appreciated, this also allows me to kind of fine tune everything, BTW I have a question just so I am clear is the western coalition still a thing since that's a central part to the Mech's Development history, also, would Hylo approve of such joint projects with Therux? Also overall how is the mech feedback helps.




[/quote]


2209: Hylo and Therux begin the Western Coalition and begin stockpiling war forces together.

2215: The 'Helen Tower' is destroyed, the Great War of Orio begins.

2221: The Outcast Guild in the Fortune Reigon is formed.

2232: The Orio war finally ends, with all 3 nations worse for wear and now under a shaky ceasefire.

[b]2235: Present Day, Western Coalition is ended.[/b]


Okay so the western coalition has literally just ended by the time of the RP so Therux-Hylo projects would have not stopped completely just yet, but yes I don't think there would be any new projects starting by the time the RP starts. Therux and Hylo's relationship is shaky, but they are still at peace for now at least.

The mech is absolutely fine, though itd me more helpful to state which 'class' the number stats are in maybe with a header.

And also your mech is a tiny bit too small, all player mechs should be between 12-20ish meters, so a slight scale up would be appreciated.