[@EurmalEye]
No worries. There's no rush here as long as nobody is waiting for you.

You can put a few more spaces between first and last name of the character. Put 'Research' instead of 'Research Division (Medical Specialization)'. Your character's chosen interests will become apparent in the story. 

Here's the big one, though: the augmented eyes due to Stigma. Spirits possess humans to stay away from harm and weakness. If a person has been infected once, that person will never possess spirits. This is why a few, select people get such a huge influx of them. However, there are two ways we can sell this to the people in charge in my head! 1. The augmented eyes were a personal choice rather than due to Stigma. 2. Jomen got infected through the eyes era, but he or someone else was fast enough to gauge his eyes out and prevent further infection. The details for the rest would have to be up to you, through flashbacks.