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Looks good! Though the only thing I'd like to say is Nadalena shouldn't be seen as having a 'short fuse' because she is very good at hiding her extreme apprehension for people and social events! She can be dismissive and a bit snipey at times (similar to a Olenna Tyrell, I suppose) but she does not have emotional control issues. I apologize if that what is seem I conveyed with her character!

Beyond that, good to get some interaction (that I didn't miss) here. Curious to see where we go from here.


I see it. But its not that hard to think that she may have a bipolar temper. At least not from the way she is so hard to socialize with that's really more from Seyrun's POV. I guess that you could say that she's trying to be cautious, perhaps?

Oh no, Fitzgerald. Welp, I guess either a red slip or a yellow slip is coming. The problem is I do not know which!


Fufufu. Poor Tilia, she just can't catch a break.
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Fair enough! Anyway, her character is loosely based on one of my older ones from another RP named Rhelissa. Here's what I wrote for that character's personality if it's useful--


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Fair enough! Anyway, her character is loosely based on one of my older ones from another RP named Rhelissa. Here's what I wrote for that character's personality if it's useful--



Very interesting. I'll take a proper look at this later but the first sentence is already very catchy.
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Obviously, adjustments would need to be made and character development can change things but it’s a good measure I think.
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Haha, poor Nadia, she doesn't even know all that is coming to her.

I see. Oh I have to tell you that there's one thing wrong in your post that Nadalena wouldn't mistake that easily. Seyrun is actually a princess as well. She's the first one in Nordland's succession line, just waiting to come of age before taking the crown from Nordland's actual regent (her uncle), after her parents passed away a few years ago.

I'll elaborate that more IC, but her CS mention it already. Though, I guess it's not hard to forget as well, since Seyrun herself hasn't mentioned it even once after her first, or second IC post, and has quite a unique attitude.

Anyway, I was just noting that Nadia wouldn't likely let that detail that the Riviathan are Nordland's current royal house escape given that their nations certain have a history that goes back for quite a long time.
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That said, I magine that Nadia would be quite distraught by such a tomboyish princess like Seyrun, who doesn't even introduces herself properly as a member of a royalty. She can probably try to call Seyrun on her manners, if she feels like it.
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Oh I have to tell you that there's one thing wrong in your post that Nadalena wouldn't mistake that easily. Seyrun is actually a princess as well. She's the first one in Nordland's succession line, just waiting to come of age before taking the crown from Nordland's actual regent (her uncle), after her parents passed away a few years ago.

I was under the impression that the heirs of grand dukes are not regarded as princesses. Just read up on it. Typical inconsistencies in my knowledge of medieval history. It’ll be amended in an edit.

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She might. Eventually.
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I was under the impression that the heirs of grand dukes are not regarded as princesses. Just read up on it. Typical inconsistencies in my knowledge of medieval history. It’ll be amended in an edit.

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She might. Eventually.


Don't worry, I plan to have enough things happening around to turn Nadalena's raven locks into a pretty stark white. Eventually will come, I'm sure of that.
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Hello everyone!
Sorry, I have been in the woods the past few days without any signal.
I will read and once I have caught up, I will post my response.
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Will try to reply in the next few.
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I'll try to post when I am not busy either running a DnD campaign or college work.
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I will post here around the weekend.
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I'm liking how things are progressing over here. I'll have my next reply sometime this weekend, by the way.
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That's right, Maya! You get to socialize! The horror, I know.
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There's enough suffering for everyone, believe me. You'll get to enjoy it.
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I'll try to post tomorrow.
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Gonna warn you all right now that I have a first batch of college tests next week and I want to focus on catching up on my college work. Should still get one up soon though.
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@Inkarnate
S-s-socialize!?
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Well, my post will be coming tomorrow. Just telling you all.

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Poor Tilia, she's in a cruel world. Good thing that Seyrun-senpai is there to take care of her. There are many interesting things to happen, many of them.
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