[@KatherinWinter] ...Ok, let's go through this one step at a time... [quote]Skills: White Flame Magic-[color=aba000] how far can his flames go? How long can he hold his flame?[/color][/quote] It depends on how he uses it. I must apologize in advance as I'm not that good at envisioning measurements. But I would have to say roughly around 2 feet to a meter as a fire stream. As a fireball, I would say it could be thrown at a distance of about three or so meters before the flames die out...which transitions to the next question: He can hold the stream for about 30 seconds to a minute under normal circumstances before it starts to retract and die out due to exhaustion. The fireball meanwhile, has a half-life of about 1-2 minutes when thrown before it bursts and dies out. Master Martial Artist- [color=aba000]why?[/color] Strength is the gold standard of demons, Might makes right in Hell, and learning how to use strength properly gives one an advantage against the raw and more instinctive demons, not to mention other entities. Plus for someone like him, who is a demon who was raised in such a world, it would make sense he'd learn about humanity through the learning of their combat, no? The Meta-Reason is that I prefer making him fight with his fist. No real reason for that. As for why he's a master, well, I can imagine the experience would make him able to be one. If you wish, though, I suppose "Expert" would do as well. The Deadly Sin of Wrath-[color=aba000] not much info. I dont understand what he can do with this.[/color] I can tell you never heard of Asura's Wrath. Fair enough, it's not a very popular game much to my personal dismay. But I imagine you at least know of the Hulk? How he turns into a green giant when angry and simply gets stronger the more angry he is? To put it simply: Azeal grows more powerful as he gets more enraged. Take the power he has as a Demon, say for example, punching a giant dent in a metal wall or car, and keep amplifying that as he gets more and more upset. Honestly there's not much more to it then that. The Flames of Wrath-[color=aba000] how is this different from the white flame?[/color] It isn't. Note how the names of my skills are marked like [b][u][i]this[/i][/u][/b]. That not having that mark is no accident; the flames of wrath is a part of the Deadly Sin of Wrath, merely separated for the sake of clean organization of the CS itself. All it simply means is that his White Flames, like his physical power, gets amplified with his anger. Personality: [color=aba000]This 'On the other hand when he's not like that, he's confident to the point of boastful, and seems to have a great pride in his skills as a fighter and in his powers as a Demon. So much pride, in fact, that he becomes incredibly upset when when one damages that pride.' Contradicts this 'Often times, he can be quite laid-back and relaxed to the point of slothful and lazy. As such, he is also a bit carefree and always seems to have confidence that things will always turn out just fine in the end.[/color] Hmm...That is a problem. Writing personality is a flaw I have. I'm not that good at it, which is partly why this took me so long. Maybe if I add that the first part's during actual combat...would that work? Name: Sora Grimoire Weapon: both scythes are actually long-barreled magnum revolvers- [color=aba000]why?[/color] Mainly the meta-reason is because that's how I envisioned his weapons to be upon his creation. I'll admit Sora's one of my lesser developed characters. So I never came up with how he got those weapons yet. Skills:"The Reaper's Touch"- [color=aba000]need more details[/color]. Gonna need specifics on what you need details on. Weakness/Limits: There's always someone stronger-[color=aba000] this is not an acceptable weakness.[/color] And Enhanced body is hardly an acceptable skill. Still I felt compelled to make a weakness for every skill I hold, and so felt compelled to make one for the Enhanced body...Not an easy feat considering it's not a "skill" more than it is a natural aspect, and it's difficult to find weakness for it, for enhanced strength is as natural to a supernatural entity as normal strength is for humans. Name: "The Vampire" Weapon: Ergo, they suspect the perp carries around bladed weapons, far larger than a knife and thicker than your average sword, possibly more than one given how different the wounds seem to be. It's possible that one of these weapons is a Chainsaw- [color=aba000]why would a vampire need a weapon like this?[/color] Note that the Vampire isn't [i]actually[/i] a vampire, as I mentioned in the species section. "The Vampire" is just a code-name due to the nature of their killings. In a world like this it's confusing, I know, but there wasn't really any other thing I could think of to call them that fits as well as that does. If anybody has any other suggestion for a code-name, I'm all ears. More to the point: "Why they would need it" is a fair, but ultimately irrelevant question. They don't "need" a chainsaw, in fact you can argue they don't "need" any of these weapons. All they'd "need" is something sharp and let their power do the rest. An insane killer of this level doesn't need a reason for why they use what they use exactly? Is it because of their victim's body-weight? Is it because the Victim pissed them off enough to warrant a gruesome death-by-chainsaw? Is it simply because she 'feels' like using a Chainsaw today? There's no exact reason that's known at the moment, and what reason there could be likely won't make any sense to the logical mind of common sense anyways. That's what makes a killer of this level so scary. Skills: Cellular Manipulation- [color=aba000]Need more information[/color] Weakness/limits: The downsides of Cellular Manipulation- [color=aba000]I don't understand this doesn't seem like a weakness.[/color] Appearance: [color=aba000]"you need an appearance[/color] I confess that the vagueness was intentional, and I apologize for that. My intention was to make it look like the Dossier of a criminal they know little about. A serial killer on the loose wouldn't be quite as grand if everything about them were revealed outright. If you'd like, I'll PM you the details of that particular power, as well as the appearance, but I'd prefer the vagueness to stay. I'd like to simply treat it like an actual file, and update it as the RP goes along. Same for the other Criminals really. Name: Blackade Scotus/Codename: "Shadow King" Age: [color=aba000]pick an age[/color] Any particular reason why you'd want it to be specific exact age? [color=aba000]How do they catch something with no form?[/color] Technically he turned himself in. But I understand that that's irrelevant. While he has no form or shape, he DOES have Mass...Magic Mass, but mass none the less. By "formless" I mean he's something of a giant black blob. There are plenty of ways to contain something like that in that respect. For instance, trapping it in an air-tight room or container where there's no cracks or holes to crawl out of. His weakness to light may help in that respect as well.