[@Demon Shinobi] Well the first thing that instantly jumps out at me is that he's missing the ambition entry. Probably just a simple oversight due to how late you were working on this, but You'll need to add in whatever his dream is. Apart from that, just a little more on history detailing what he did to get caught and locked up by Krabbe, and the Kite 2.0 will be good to go!