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[@Techspert]
Ok. Also, I didn't do too much for my char profile did I? I'm still new here so I'm not sure.

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We don't really use character sheets (I'm going to try to get that tab itself removed eventually), but she seems fine from what I read, though I'm only through half of it. I will say that vampires are an often used concept (not so much here, but people have tried them and they tend to be phased out one way or another over time), but I do appreciate that from what I've read so far, that isn't the defining aspect of who she is. She's also adorable, so bonus points for that. Your writing is good, though keep our posting style in mind, because this is effectively set to burst mode rather than long, drawn out descriptions. Imagine a camera setup recording notes about what's going on, and that should help out a bit. Red magic is cool, and I'll give you more feedback tomorrow when I have the opportunity to analyze it more. If you're interested in our less than common style, you're more than welcome to give it a shot; this isn't so much an RP as it is a record of what is happening in the multiverse, and we just happen to be able to record what events are going on in the world outside ours. We hope you find something you like!