Just a question about my writing style:

Is it okay the way I write now, quoting what others have said to me in my posts so Ren gets a chance to respond and/or think in between their comments, or is it just confusing? I try to make it clear who is speaking by copying the right colors and with paragraphs, but it might be more clear to me than to others. I write like this because I think it makes the dialogue more dynamic and not so divided, but if it's just confusing I shall stick to my own writing.