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[b]Alim Blackmoor by Poohead189[/b]

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*You should put your skills in the Highly/Moderately/Somewhat proficient category like the sheet requests just to keep things kosher. Also double check to make sure your formatting is consistent with this character sheet skeleton for this game.  

*I know I’ve been over the sheet before, but one thing I didn’t really ask the first time around is why would Alim’s father take him with him back to High Rock from his mother? He’s obviously a noble of high standing with trueborn sons, so why bring a bastard into his house? Did his mother not want him, was his father a good man who didn’t want to abandon his son or just vain and didn’t want his blood mucking about?

*Other than that, revisions look good! I remember it took a bit of work the first time around, but Alim’s a pretty solid character with a lot of history and adventures under his belt, and I’m glad you agreed to keep Beric as an open end by just having his name in the necromancer’s journal rather than being present in the cave Alim happened to discover. It gives you a chance for some storylines to explore later on. Anyways, good stuff!
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I think you know better than anyone how long I've been wanting to hit the ground running with this character. I want to say I appreciate you taking the time to look over mine and everyone elses' sheets so thoroughly, and I hope he gets into the roster. 

Here's my response to your critique, bud. 

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*Switched around the template to better adhere to the one you laid out for this RP. I kept the old one for the beginning parts mostly because it looked good, rather than lazy copy/pasting. But I switched it back to normal per your request. 

*Added that his mother wanted him to go to High Rock so he could have a better life, and his father agreed out of pride, but also to keep himself away from a guilty conscience. 

*Changed the wording on my skills for you to Highly/Moderate/Somewhat proficient.
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Can't wait for the final tally, dude!