[quote=@Perpenheimer]
[@Brocktree] Looks good, just a couple notes. Make sure it's okay with Arkitekt that you cross that bit of lore over. Other than that my only major problem is with the 'Other' section. For one, you kinda have to be connected to the Neuranet via neural implants if you want to be in the Collective. The Collective has also enjoyed peace for hundreds of years, so a digital attack of that manner would not have occurred, and even if it did happen long ago, at 37 Atellus is not nearly old enough to have experienced that.


Also, just a note, the OOC is indeed up and we no longer need to use this topic.
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Ill make sure to get arkitekt's okay or i'll edit it out.

On the other account, the digital attack im proposing would've happened prior to his service with the vanguard, while he still served one of the exile planets. I figure that on the solward side of the collective, being so far from solomon, that it would be more likely to see that kind of illegal attack, especially if undertaking some sort of anti-piracy mission.

Of course, regardless of how i see it, if you wish i will edit it out. I just thought it would be interesting to roleplay the benefits and drawbacks of someone who uses non bio-integrated technology in a society that was very nearly transhuman.

Oh, and as a final side note, if you think i should make him older to account for these things i would be glad to.