[quote=@BespeckledCeph]
[@Balthazar007]
I think I went a little hard on her...
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Meh, maybe. But it had to be done. 

I do have one critique though, from a writing standpoint: You switched between present tense and past tense very frequently. It made it a little hard to read. 
I'm not asking you to edit anything. Just be aware of that in future posts please. 

Alright everyone! Check the 0th OOC post for the updated character roster.