[@LordofthePies] We already discussed this some. Once we talk about those alterations some more he'll probably be accepted. 

[@Wick] I adore that sweet little badass.  Now I will say this,  the King isn't actually sexist,  not only did he train his daughter to be an exemplery diplomat but one of his most trusted,  albeit secretly,  advisors is a woman.  So my advice alter it to an insult about being poor something he does discriminate against. 

[@pandapolio] So your cs is nice.  I like him loads already.  I can't wait to read your writing Example! One last thing,  re-read your CS and check for missing words.  While I don't get super annoying about gramma while In Casual,  I do like for sentences to be legible without playing fill in the blank.