I'd be happy to edit whatever needs editing, However I think you'll find I never agnoledged his control of your character percius. So I doubt I need to do any edits of my own.

As you can see all she did was drool over him a little.
However if I'm wrong please let me know what I need to change, I don't remember ever giving  agknoledgement of the blacksmith doing anything but help phina c: .
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