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For you maybe! It is almost 9 in the morning here! :P
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May I get some more info on where Grace is and if I can just pop in there?
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@NewShoesForever@twannyman What do you guys think of my writing so far? :) PM me if you want :)
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>Most people are in the tavern.

>Grace and Arathion (@DragonofTheWest) are outside said tavern, arguing about the elves enlisting civilians to fight the war with the resistance.
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I dislike the color's

Nah that is a joke, it's fine altough I'm used to more if I'm not like tired af
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Thanks, time to write you something
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Pretty solid. Good tone and pacing. May want to insert a couple more line breaks, it looks a little monolithic.
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Just don't go too nuts, I don't want to leave Dragon behind. I believe is more active later in the day.

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Dw, I got some great plans, and a tired brains os not like 4-5 paragraphs
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@NewShoesForever@twannyman Thanks guys :) Have you seen the post I did yesterday, I've edited the format a bit :) Do you think it looks better? :)
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Yes. It's very much more visually appealing.
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@NewShoesForever Thanks :D Anything else you think I can improve on? :)
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Much easier on the eyes. I love it.
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@AvaliAnything else I can do to improve? :)
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Nothing in particular ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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Nah. Nothing else springs to mind.
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Thanks for helping guys :) @NewShoesForever@Avali@twannyman
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This is just to get into the plot and some char involvement
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I can't respond right away.

I really don't want to leave dragon behind.
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