[quote=@Peridot]
[@MissCapnCrunch]
Awesome - love what you've done with my boring character sheet! Just a few points:
- While I love the picture you've used, I understand the model is 22 years old. At a stretch she could be passable as a teenager, but not sure about 15-years-old. If you could find one of her looking a touch younger that would be great, but until then I think I'll let it slide.
- An explanation for why she was born the States but came to England will be needed.
Other than that, what an amazing character. Loved what you did with the writing sample, it was a really original idea that I hadn't even considered could be possible.[/quote]

[i]Right on! I was thinking about this too- figured since it's set in the 50's and women seemed to be a bit older looking back then (I don't know why it seems like that to me, maybe because of the clothing and hairstyles) that it could fly- but i'll look around to see if the model has anything of the younger persuasion- if not, like you said ^^; we'll just let it dangle.

I'll figure out why they ended up in England :) and add it to her history. Thank you![/i]