[@Gummy1295] I'm liking that someone seems to have gone full "fuck this shit". I like his internal monologue and how that related back to his feelings about the other students in the car. [@Raddum] I couldn't help but chuckle when he asked for a crowbar. Out of character motivations...was he being serious, or trying to crack a small joke? Either way it's telling of who he is. [@Ammokkx] Every persona group has to have the person who's entirely too calm :D I really like how you introduced the scissors as a weapon. I feel like the way you wrote it helped to make them sound more lethal than "don't run with scissors." I also dug how you utilized lore in your post! [@Tenma Tendo] I feel like you really got across the mix between being afraid, but wanting to work toward solutions at the same time. Clutching the locket was a nice touch and felt very real to her character. Everyone's posts have been great so far. Looking forward to reading [@Aislynn] next :D