I still can't help feeling like I made a mess of things. The story is a jumbled mess, and I don't know what to do with all the player characters.
* How do I give Ravadon opportunities to actually be heroic, and possibly deconstruct that?
* How do I challenge powerful characters like Edward and Reaper?
* How do I convey days/years worth of training for Kiera?
* I NEED TO BRING GRACE IN HERE! A brief timeskip is needed for communication between nations to be plausible, but we're nowhere near that point.
* The king is too weak. Why should anyone do what he asks?
* Why should the characters rescue the princesses from a dragon who they know is on our side?
* How do I link everything to the problem of the Voids?

Help!