[b]FUN FACT:[/b] Everyone that applied is accepted. Below you'll have my critiques and your character's perks. Read through them, change what I tell you to, and use the character titles for yours, and post them into the Character Tab.

[@Zoey White]
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In the first round of posting, I didn't find anything wrong with your character. I still don't.

Sylvia's Perk:
[b]A True Chemist:[/b] You are capable of discerning if the drugs/medicine/etc has been poisoned/tampered/made better. Your years with drugs have led you to know when you're being fooled or whether it's the real thing. This is also applicable to drugs you don't use, but with a bit more time inspecting it.
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[@Searat]
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10/10 job fixing your character. I really like him, and you did a bang up job tweaking the things that I wanted you to.

Felix's Perk:
[b]Hero of the Swampland:[/b] You're the first to fire even when presented with quicker-than-possible enemies. Your years of training altruism has led you to this.[/hider]

[@Tim]
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Your fixes are great and what I asked! I am excited to have T.

T's Perk:
[b]I Can't Do that Dave:[/b] Despite being a synth, most people believe you to be a person. That being said, your affinity is with machines. You have advantage when dealing with robots and mechanics.[/hider]

[@Rtron]
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I love Frankie. We've talked about him a lot. But he's a great character. And I love that glitter fleur-de-lies.

Frankie's Perk:
[b]I'm SPECIAL:[/b] Sacrifice a point of INTELLIGENCE for a boost of STRENGTH. This is permanent until the next day when it resets.[/hider]

[@Simple Unicycle]
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Joe's good, thanks for changing his SPECIAL around to reflect him better.

Joe's Perk:
[b]Ugly but Strong:[/b] Once a day, Joe can forget about pain, problems, and consequences, and have a boost of a Strength of 10. That being said, the next day he'll feel all the wounds two-fold and his SPECIAL is halfed.[/hider]

[@WXer]
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Your fixes are perfect, thank you for them.

Franz's Perk:
[b]The Best Salesman this Side of the Missippi:[/b] You have an advantage on all Charisma/Barter checks. You know far more than any salesman or traveling merchant. You're the best of the best, and you let them know.[/hider]

[@rocketrobie2]
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Your CS is acceptable. You lack a part of it that is important. We RP together, so I don't view it too harshly. Please re-read the rules and apply the thing you're missing before putting your character in the Character Tab.

Leg's Perk:
[b]I Think you Misheard; I Meant This:[/b] You can redo any Charisma you or your party has. If someone fails on convincing/charming/etc a NPC, you can erase their attempt and begin a new one.[/hider]

[@CaptainSully]
[hider]NOTED, YOUR BANNER IS SUFFICIENT AND DOESN'T NEED REPLACING
I like your character, but you need a weakness that is REALLY a weakness of your character. Your strengths are strong and your character needs a weakness that heavily affects theme. I like the molerats and angry negatives. I feel like your last one could be more impactful. Your strengths are strong, and so I need at least one weakness that is detrimental.

Sully's Perk:
[b]Master Hunter:[/b] You have advantage against inhuman creatures.[/hider]

[@Rockette]
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After reading through your character, she's accepted. To anyone reading this, she had a character made and was called in. As someone that has been in the same situation, I sympathize. She worked with me. So, I am more flexible with her. Sorry!

Vix's Perk:
[b]And The Kitchen Sink:[/b] You have advantage with throwing items. And people that throw things against you, you can dodge out of their way quicker.[/hider]