[i][@Master Crim] Looks really good! My only questions is about the bank accounts, where are they offshore? alternative? How? Is it under another indentity? Since bank accounts are tied to your body. Just a thought :) If you can explain those thoughts to me everything looks good and be sent to the bin when ready~ [@lozi] I really enjoyed reading this final product of your character! Great relationships and interesting backstory- my only thing is physical money is no longer carrying meaning- besides maybe sentimental to someone, somewhere. All assets are through your brand- :) [@Mattchstick] Yes it did! FINAL DAY TO APPLY TODAY! Everything must be turned in TODAY unless specified otherwise![/i]