Alright, sorry folks. Firstly, jiwon: I don't know where you're coming up with some of these things. There aren't PMC's controlling neighborhoods or anything like that, let alone ones scouting for people with book smarts. It would be much more realistic to say that his grades gained him the opportunity with some kind of scholarship. As I said, the police are militarized but there wouldn't be any need to have conglomerate-controlled PMC's roaming about just yet. Otherwise you're looking good. Tesseract: The character is up to par. Accepted. Midori: I appreciate how cooperative you've been in not causing a bottleneck at the warehouse entrance. Since Sturm hasn't posted in two days, I'll put Mr. Redline on the back burner for now and let him re-intro later. You can feel free to be the next one to go to the door. So for all of you: Allow Midori some time to intro and get settled before you post please and thanks.