[quote=Hexaflexagon] Eh You win some and you lose some. Not being as awful as expected is always a bonus though. [/quote] Sucks cause I did SO WELL on the first, that it just brought my total average for them both down but hey, could be worse. *nods* And tomorrow is my last class, then I have the final next week and I'm home free, no more math forever! I've been insanely busy lately and drinking, but man, I need to get back to writing. It's been too long. And look another CS! *dances* @Side Character G: Very interesting "weapon" of choice. I have some questions: Do the colors represent various events? (ex: Green disrupts signal, yellow creates some sort of gooey entrapment, etc) How are they summoned? Mentally with a hand in the air? Or are they carried on the Corrector? I was about to then ask why, with his skills in physical combat, his Corrector alias wouldn't take advantage of that directly but I can see why after after reading into the history. Overall, I really like your character's backstory. It's interesting, realistic, and very "human" which I can totally give kudos to. In regards to my questions which you answered, your answers are fine with me. Now in regards to your questions for me: -Query about the setting. About MChips: "Should you wish to listen to music, it allows you to do so without even needing headphones, transmitting music directly to your brain without disturbing anyone around it". From the introduction: "they [cell phones of 2021] play music but this music is different, it can take people into a digital realm called the DgtWld". I'm probably over thinking this but I wanted to make sure. The 'music' which MChips emit does not allow the user to access the Internet. True or False? A: I may need to edit, it's been a while since I've looked at my timeline since I started the RP so long ago and have done tweaking between now and then. But to answer your question, should someone listen to music (say it's freaky German metal) they could also be taken to a night club or some place like Chernobyl. Or if they're buying things online, music could still be listened to, granted thanks to the MChip itself, it wouldn't create noise pollution around them. Does that help sort of? I made up my 'senior' Corrector, is that okay? If not I can change it. A: Nope, that's cool with me. Are the Correctors restricted from using Cnnt to enter the DgtWld when they are not on duty? A: They are able to use Cnnt when "off duty" though they tend to be always "on call" in their area, so notifications can come in during any time of day, there isn't really a restricted time of day or area in which they cannot go. -Status of this role play. I saw that the date when this thread was created was roughly one month ago. What is the hold-up, real-life issues or incomplete character sheets? (or other?) A: I'd say character sheets, and the new Guild is starting up as well so everyone is a bit finicky with RPs and keeping tabs on RPs. I think we couldn't subscribe to threads back when this was made. I don't recall. As for my personal stuff, well my semester is very close to ending so I should be much less busy now. But I can assure you, having run this on the old site for nearly three years, I do know what I'm doing. ^^; And Adv RPs can tend to run on the sluggish side, but usually the wait is in fact worth it. -To be honest I have no idea if I am capable of Advanced Roleplay and this will be my first ARP thread. If you think I am not 'up to the standards', please be merciless in whipping me up to shape I love being whipped. Also please leave no hesitation if I am deemed incapable of Advanced Roleplay, no hard feelings. I'd rather be kicked than mess up others' fun. If you'd like a role play sample that can easily be arranged also. A: Based on what I've seen out of your CS, you should fit in well. If you don't, I'll let you know. I'm not very picky, as long as someone puts in evident effort, I'm a happy GM. But if someone looks to be shirking responsibility on purpose, then I get feisty. But if you think you can post what you did in your background regularly, then I'm happy to accept you, your CS doesn't look like it needs any real tweaks or fixes, save for anymore clarification you have for your weapons. ^^