Since my reactionary post ended up being a bit longer than I thought, I think what I'd like to do is post what I've got, and you can make a post on your own, Beowulf, and then we'll collaborate on one big post and get to the docks, or whatever is necessary, depending on how the pace of this scene ends up. That way we don't have to worry about bouncing off of each other with smaller fragmented posts, and if a situation comes up where we need the other's help, we don't have to wait on it.

How does that sound to you?