[quote=@SleepingSilence]
[@tobiax] The repeated and numerous techniques nearly follow the (mostly) in-cannon move-set for the characters line. So that's why the characters have the movesets they have. Can we have non-cannon movesets? If so I'll just make up my own abilities in editing.[/quote]

That's not the main point. You have too many Techniques on the majority of your Digimon stages for their level. For Nyaromon, you have two extra versions of the [i]exact same move[/i] with names that have no citation on the source provided. For Salamon, it's rare for Digimon to have three Techniques for any individual Rookie to use. And having two attacks named "Darkness Wave" for Lady Devimon is just silly.
Also, big leap of logic there bub.

[quote=@SleepingSilence]
(Also, was I blind or was that something not added for clarification on the intro page? That's usually where you should put all that stuff, if it differs from the norm.)[/quote]

What I mentioned really doesn't differ from the norm. That [i]is[/i] the norm.

[quote=@SleepingSilence]Ah, one of those. I had a sneaking suspicion that every time I assume we're going to start in media res. We end up going to the "it starts before anything/everything" deal. That really needs to be listed on every introduction/OOC page before people have to redo all their stuff. :P (If that is, my mistake.) 

But again, it won't take me that long to fix.[/quote]

Yeah... character sheets aren't really in media res. Like ever.

[quote=@SleepingSilence]Also, to properly explain why he fits knowledge. He has private knowledge of many things through hacking, and he uses that knowledge (and obtains it) in a corrupt manner. I think a manipulative sociopath (who are often highly intelligent.) works pretty well in that regard...and I gave him some actual character. So he wouldn't have to be an outright villain character, if we were suppose to be hero (anti-hero) archetypes. I don't get why "social" and especially "capable" (separate words in my personality sheet), can't be a "hacker" to you?[/quote]

It didn't come across in the character sheet.
And because being a hacker- especially one that's any good, takes time. Lots of time. And time is a limited resource.

[quote=@SleepingSilence]Actually, I was going to ask if you could be more specific in what exactly feels fragmented? The separate paragraphs all have a connecting theme. But I'm fine with editing that too. I could probably do better anyway.[/quote]

The writing as a whole. Sentences are short and disconnected. Some of them, honestly, are just fragments. They don't have flow in themselves, and don't flow to the next sentence after. As a result, it was hard to understand, and a bit bloated if I may be frank.

[quote=@SleepingSilence]If you want me to just simplify it further. Because just looking at the other character sheets. Personality isn't even separately elaborated on, so I don't know how those characters will actually interact or behave much at all. And is mixed into the background/life details. So if you want me to mimic that. I can clear my sheet off and do so. (Just need my queries answered first. So I know what I'm doing. :3)[/quote]

See, this is making me think that you didn't read any other character sheets really. Because while most were on the shorter side, yes, they had enough information, yet were succinct enough, to know who the character is. The reason that it's just "Bio" and not "Biography" and "Personality" is because, honestly, I didn't want the character sheets to be over-bloated brick walls of text. Furthermore, it's so show what their personality is and, more importantly, [i]why[/i], in one place, instead of sprawled out in two places. 

[quote=@SleepingSilence]I also already thought sincerity was one of the empty slots? (So does that mean you're waiting on another person? Or well, how many players would you like before you'd consider starting?)[/quote]

Yes. Because someone just left before you showed up. Enter's just quick on the edit I guess.

[quote=@SleepingSilence]Anything else I should know about? That's been discussed for the future plot that has yet to be added in the beginning of the OOC page?
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Nope, WYSIWYG.