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2. I cannot find any issues with the code for my third picture- if someone could look at the raw code and tell me what I am doing wrong, that would be great.
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Looking at the raw code, I can't find the issue so maybe just put the image through Imgur and use that link.

[quote=@blackdragon]
3. Sickness blasts are a more targeted and stronger version of her aura. Victims start feeling ill and lethargic with weaker attacks, but if she puts more into it, like in the sample, she can cause targets to collapse in exhaustion and even fall unconscious.
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This is fine. Just make sure to add it to her CS.

[quote=@blackdragon]
5. I thought the sample post was just to give you an idea of writing quality.
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While the sample post is to gauge your writing quality, we also want to make sure you have a firm grasp of the RP's universe. That being said, is the sample post canon or just a scenario you made?

Aside from these and the backstory, everything else is good to go. We'll let you know our verdict on the backstory after discussing it.