You seem to rush and end a lot of scenes before they even start. Dunno if that's just your writing style, but I never had the Pawniard guys even reach ya yet.
Sorry about that... I'm a bit used to being the GM.
By the way... would you like me to edit? Please tell me if you'd like that, just keep in mind that a cowardly character like Trevor probably wouldn't be convinced to head into a dark alley.
You're fine, those two will just get outplayed somehow. They're grunts after all. Most it probably would have done was turn into a skirmish between the Pawniard and the Team.
Well, I JUST finished my final project, so, expect a post soon, as in, in a few days at the absolute most. MAN it feels good being done with that, at least for a while.