[quote=@Hellis]
Otherewise you would not have decided to make a 6 point list to attack every part of my post.
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This is an exaggeration. I just pointed out things I either took some issue with (particularly things that looked suspiciously close to meta-gaming, which I dislike), or didn't quite understand. It's not an attack.

[quote=@Hellis]
I could easily tear into yours or others posts if I wanted to.
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Go ahead. I don't mind criticism. If my posts are so easy to criticize, then I really would like to know what's wrong.

[quote=@Hellis]
1) I read it as if she was facing the bathroom with all that had happened, so you know. Its the only other area then th diner itself there would be something of a guest. Its basic logic.
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I personally saw no indication of that. It just said she went into a corner and huddled up. We will need the person who actually wrote the post to clarify, but even if she was looking it, that doesn't mean something she needed was inside - remember that the bathroom is the source of all the chaos in the room, which has everyone's attention.

[quote=@Hellis]
2) He doesn't. He just assume.
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But I'm not sure why he made that assumption.

[quote=@Hellis]
He doesnt know what she need exactly. He just recognice a behavior he has seen a lot among junkies and people who take prescription.
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What behavior did he recognize?

[quote=@Hellis]
4) He has a rough past, he had a shit day, he hates the town, he doesn't want to be there. ANd people are running nad yelling and what not. Yes, he armed himself.
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Okay, but it's still illegal, and something that almost everyone would regard as a hostile action. If he pulls out a knife the first time he sees something unusual, how has he not already been arrested?


[quote=@Hellis]
Its the best way to introduce him in my eyes and other people can easily write about how this outragous person just steps right into the situation and play off it. ITs not hard to work with.
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I personally disagree. Your character does not need to be the center of attention, especially when there's already so much else to react to. Between the tiger, the horned kid, the decay, the vanishing kid, and the terrified girl, there's already a lot on everyone's plate.

[quote=@Hellis]
6) But nobody had, and I felt like diving right in. And I dont see why we should wait unless there is a turn order. Thats how rp's stagnate. 
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You didn't really give them a chance. I am of the opinion that the people closest to the action should be allowed to react to that action first.

[quote=@Hellis]
Or do you wanna attack my writing further?
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This is not an attack. There is no need to get so hostile.